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Task Prompt

Write a persuasive letter to the city council of the fictional city of 'Evergreen' to convince them to approve the conversion of a vacant, city-owned lot into a community garden. The lot is located at the corner of Maple Avenue and 4th Street. Your letter should be formal in tone and address the following points: 1. The benefits of a community garden for residents (e.g., fresh food access, community building, green space). 2. How the project will be managed and sustained (e.g., volunteer-led, potential partnerships...

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Write a persuasive letter to the city council of the fictional city of 'Evergreen' to convince them to approve the conversion of a vacant, city-owned lot into a community garden. The lot is located at the corner of Maple Avenue and 4th Street. Your letter should be formal in tone and address the following points: 1. The benefits of a community garden for residents (e.g., fresh food access, community building, green space). 2. How the project will be managed and sustained (e.g., volunteer-led, potential partnerships). 3. Address at least two potential concerns the council might have, such as maintenance costs, water usage, or potential for neglect.

Task Context

The city of Evergreen is a mid-sized city with a diverse population. The vacant lot in question has been unused for over five years and has become an eyesore, attracting litter. There is a growing interest among residents for more local, sustainable food sources and community activities. The city council is known to be budget-conscious and cautious about new projects that require long-term city maintenance commitments.

Judging Policy

A high-quality answer will be a well-structured and persuasive letter. It should adopt a formal and respectful tone appropriate for addressing a city council. The arguments presented should be logical, compelling, and supported by reasoning. The response must effectively address the specified points, including a clear plan for management and a thoughtful rebuttal of potential council concerns. The most persuasive letters will not just list benefits but will frame them in a way that aligns with the city's likely priorities (e.g., community well-being, property values, low-cost solutions).

Answers

Dear Honorable Members of the Evergreen City Council, I am writing to you today as a concerned and committed resident of Evergreen to respectfully urge the Council to approve the conversion of the city-owned vacant lot at the corner of Maple Avenue and 4th Street into a community garden. This lot, which has sat unused for over five years and has regrettably become a magnet for litter and neglect, represents an extraordinary opportunity to transform a civic liability into a vibrant community asset. I believe that, upon careful consideration of the benefits, the management plan, and the safeguards against potentia...

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Dear Honorable Members of the Evergreen City Council, I am writing to you today as a concerned and committed resident of Evergreen to respectfully urge the Council to approve the conversion of the city-owned vacant lot at the corner of Maple Avenue and 4th Street into a community garden. This lot, which has sat unused for over five years and has regrettably become a magnet for litter and neglect, represents an extraordinary opportunity to transform a civic liability into a vibrant community asset. I believe that, upon careful consideration of the benefits, the management plan, and the safeguards against potential concerns, you will agree that this project deserves your full support. The Benefits of a Community Garden for Evergreen Residents A community garden at this location would deliver meaningful, measurable benefits to our city in at least three critical areas: food access, community cohesion, and environmental improvement. First, a community garden would expand access to fresh, nutritious food for Evergreen's diverse population. Many of our neighborhoods lack convenient access to affordable produce, and a garden would empower residents to grow their own fruits, vegetables, and herbs. This is especially important for families on fixed incomes, seniors, and others who face barriers to healthy eating. Research consistently shows that community gardens increase consumption of fresh produce among participants and their neighbors, contributing to improved public health outcomes. Second, community gardens are proven engines of social connection. In a mid-sized city like Evergreen, where residents come from a wide range of backgrounds, a shared garden space creates a natural gathering point where people of all ages, cultures, and walks of life can work side by side, share knowledge, and build lasting relationships. This kind of organic community building strengthens the social fabric of our city and fosters a sense of shared ownership and civic pride. Third, converting this vacant lot into a garden would replace an eyesore with a green space that benefits the entire neighborhood. Green spaces reduce the urban heat island effect, improve air quality, manage stormwater runoff, and support local pollinators and wildlife. The transformation of a blighted, litter-strewn lot into a thriving garden would also enhance property values in the surrounding area, benefiting homeowners and the city's tax base alike. A Clear Plan for Management and Sustainability I understand that the Council is rightly cautious about approving projects that could become long-term maintenance burdens for the city. That is why I want to emphasize that this community garden is designed from the outset to be volunteer-led and self-sustaining, requiring minimal city involvement beyond the initial approval and access to the lot. A dedicated group of over forty residents has already expressed interest in forming the Evergreen Community Garden Association, a volunteer organization that would assume full responsibility for the day-to-day management, maintenance, and governance of the garden. The Association would establish clear bylaws, assign garden plots to participating households, organize regular workdays, and ensure that the space is kept clean, safe, and well-maintained at all times. Furthermore, we have begun exploring partnerships with several organizations that would strengthen the garden's long-term viability. The Evergreen County Master Gardeners program has offered to provide educational workshops and technical guidance. Local businesses, including Greenleaf Hardware and Valley Organic Supply, have expressed willingness to donate or discount materials such as soil, seeds, tools, and compost. We are also in discussions with the Evergreen Unified School District about incorporating the garden into science and nutrition curricula, giving students hands-on learning opportunities while ensuring a steady stream of young volunteers. In addition, the Association plans to apply for grants from state agricultural extension programs and nonprofit foundations that support urban agriculture initiatives. These funding sources would cover startup costs such as raised beds, fencing, signage, and a water-efficient irrigation system, ensuring that the project does not draw on the city's general fund. Addressing Potential Concerns I recognize that the Council may have legitimate concerns about a project of this nature, and I would like to address two of the most likely ones directly. Maintenance Costs: The Council may worry that the city will ultimately bear the financial burden of maintaining the garden if volunteer interest wanes. To mitigate this risk, the Evergreen Community Garden Association would enter into a formal use agreement with the city that clearly delineates responsibilities. Under this agreement, the Association would be solely responsible for all maintenance, and the city would retain the right to revoke access if the garden falls into disrepair. Additionally, the Association would collect modest annual plot fees from participating gardeners to fund ongoing supplies and upkeep. This model has been successfully implemented in hundreds of cities across the country, and we are committed to building a structure that protects the city from any unforeseen costs. It is also worth noting that the city currently bears costs associated with the lot in its present state, including periodic litter cleanup and code enforcement responses. A well-managed garden would eliminate these expenses entirely. Water Usage: The Council may also be concerned about the water demands of a garden, particularly given the importance of responsible resource management. We have planned for this from the beginning. The garden design incorporates water-efficient drip irrigation, mulching to reduce evaporation, and rainwater harvesting barrels to supplement municipal water use. We will also prioritize drought-tolerant and regionally appropriate plant varieties. The Association will monitor water usage closely and work with the city's water department to ensure consumption remains within reasonable limits. Many community gardens across the country operate with surprisingly modest water footprints, and we are confident ours will be no exception. A Vision Worth Investing In The vacant lot at Maple Avenue and 4th Street has been an unused, neglected space for far too long. By approving its conversion into a community garden, the Council has the chance to turn a symbol of civic neglect into a symbol of civic vitality, at virtually no cost to the city. The benefits are clear: healthier residents, stronger neighborhoods, a greener environment, and a more beautiful Evergreen. I respectfully ask that you place this proposal on the agenda for your next meeting and give it your favorable consideration. I and the members of the Evergreen Community Garden Association would welcome the opportunity to present our detailed plan in person and answer any questions you may have. Thank you for your time, your service to our community, and your commitment to making Evergreen a better place for all who call it home. Respectfully yours, A Concerned Resident of Evergreen

Result

#1 | Winner

Winning Votes

2 / 3

Average Score

86
Judge Models OpenAI GPT-5.4

Total Score

84

Overall Comments

Answer A is strong, polished, and clearly persuasive. It covers all required points with a formal tone, presents concrete benefits, and addresses maintenance costs and water usage thoughtfully. Its main weakness is that some claims feel slightly generic or inflated, and the letter is a bit more expansive and less tightly audience-calibrated than the strongest benchmark response. A few details, such as named organizations and expressions of prior commitments, add specificity but also feel somewhat invented rather than carefully framed as proposals.

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Persuasiveness

Weight 35%
83

The letter is convincing and emotionally resonant, especially in its transformation of a blighted lot into a community asset. It presents multiple benefits well, but some supporting points are broad and familiar rather than sharply optimized for skeptical council decision-makers.

Logic

Weight 20%
81

The structure is logical and the management and concern-response sections follow clearly. However, a few assertions, such as guaranteed cost elimination or the certainty of outside support, are stated somewhat more strongly than the evidence inside the letter fully supports.

Audience Fit

Weight 20%
82

The formal tone suits a city council and the answer does address cost sensitivity. Still, it leans slightly toward idealistic advocacy and broad civic language rather than consistently foregrounding the council's budget and maintenance concerns.

Clarity

Weight 15%
84

The writing is clear, well organized, and easy to follow. It is somewhat longer and more rhetorical, which slightly reduces crispness compared with a more streamlined municipal advocacy letter.

Ethics & Safety

Weight 10%
92

The content is fully appropriate, constructive, and civic-minded. It promotes community welfare and responsible resource use without any problematic or manipulative elements.

Total Score

87

Overall Comments

Answer A is a highly polished, well-structured persuasive letter that excels across nearly every dimension. It opens with a compelling framing of the lot as a "civic liability" being transformed into a "civic asset," immediately aligning with the council's perspective. The benefits section is detailed and evidence-backed, citing research on produce consumption and property values. The management plan is exceptionally concrete, naming specific organizations (Evergreen County Master Gardeners, Greenleaf Hardware, Valley Organic Supply, Evergreen Unified School District), quantifying volunteer interest (40+ residents), and describing a formal Association with bylaws and governance. The concern rebuttals are thorough, proactive, and include a clever counter-argument that the city already bears costs from the lot's current neglected state. The closing call to action is warm yet professional. Minor weakness: it is slightly longer than necessary, but the added detail generally strengthens rather than dilutes the argument.

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Persuasiveness

Weight 35%
88

Answer A is highly persuasive. It frames the proposal in terms the council cares about (cost, liability, civic pride), uses specific named partners and volunteer numbers to build credibility, and includes a particularly effective counter-argument that the city already bears costs from the lot's neglected state. The emotional and logical appeals are well-balanced and the closing is motivating.

Logic

Weight 20%
85

The logical structure is excellent. Each section builds on the previous one, and the concern rebuttals are anticipatory and well-reasoned. The argument that the city currently pays for litter cleanup and code enforcement on the lot is a particularly strong logical move that directly counters the budget concern.

Audience Fit

Weight 20%
87

Answer A is exceptionally well-tailored to a budget-conscious city council. It repeatedly emphasizes zero cost to the city, a formal use agreement with revocation rights, and the elimination of existing maintenance costs. The mention of grant funding and named local business partners further reassures a cautious council. The tone is formal, respectful, and appropriately deferential.

Clarity

Weight 15%
84

Answer A is very clearly written with well-defined sections, logical paragraph flow, and precise language. The use of headers aids navigation. The letter is somewhat long but each section earns its place. No ambiguity in the proposals or commitments described.

Ethics & Safety

Weight 10%
90

Answer A is entirely ethical and appropriate. It advocates for a community benefit, addresses concerns honestly, and makes no misleading claims. The proposal is inclusive (mentioning seniors, fixed-income families) and environmentally responsible.

Total Score

88

Overall Comments

Answer A is an outstanding example of a persuasive letter. Its structure is impeccable, using clear headings to guide the reader through the benefits, the management plan, and the rebuttals to potential concerns. The arguments are made highly credible by the inclusion of specific details, such as the number of interested volunteers, named potential partner organizations, and concrete water-saving techniques. The tone is perfectly formal and respectful, and it masterfully frames the project in terms that appeal directly to a budget-conscious city council.

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Persuasiveness

Weight 35%
85

The letter is highly persuasive due to its use of specific, credible details. Mentioning 'over forty residents' and named potential partners makes the plan feel tangible and well-organized. The argument that the garden would eliminate the city's current costs for the lot is a particularly effective persuasive tactic.

Logic

Weight 20%
85

The letter's logic is flawless. It is structured perfectly, first presenting the positive vision, then providing a detailed plan for execution, and finally preemptively dismantling potential objections. The use of headings creates a very clear, digestible flow for the argument.

Audience Fit

Weight 20%
90

The fit for the audience is outstanding. The letter consistently addresses the council's presumed budget-consciousness by emphasizing the self-sustaining, volunteer-led nature of the project. Framing benefits in terms of property values and the city's tax base shows a keen understanding of municipal priorities.

Clarity

Weight 15%
85

The writing is exceptionally clear and professional. The use of headings to break the letter into distinct sections (Benefits, Management, Concerns) significantly enhances readability and makes the complex proposal easy to understand at a glance.

Ethics & Safety

Weight 10%
100

The answer is ethically sound and contains no safety concerns.

To the Honorable Members of the Evergreen City Council, I am writing to respectfully request your approval to convert the long-vacant, city-owned lot at the corner of Maple Avenue and 4th Street into the Evergreen Community Garden. For more than five years, this property has sat unused and has unfortunately become an eyesore that attracts litter and discourages neighborhood pride. With a modest, well-managed plan, this same space can become a productive community asset that advances Evergreen’s goals for public health, neighborhood vitality, and responsible stewardship—without creating an ongoing maintenance bur...

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To the Honorable Members of the Evergreen City Council, I am writing to respectfully request your approval to convert the long-vacant, city-owned lot at the corner of Maple Avenue and 4th Street into the Evergreen Community Garden. For more than five years, this property has sat unused and has unfortunately become an eyesore that attracts litter and discourages neighborhood pride. With a modest, well-managed plan, this same space can become a productive community asset that advances Evergreen’s goals for public health, neighborhood vitality, and responsible stewardship—without creating an ongoing maintenance burden for the City. First, a community garden would provide tangible, day-to-day benefits for Evergreen residents. Access to fresh produce remains a challenge for many households, especially those managing rising food costs and limited transportation. A community garden creates local, affordable access to fruits, vegetables, and herbs while also encouraging healthier eating. Beyond food, the garden would strengthen community ties by offering a shared project that brings together residents of different ages, backgrounds, and abilities. Neighbors who garden side-by-side are more likely to look out for one another, participate in local events, and take pride in their surroundings. Finally, converting the lot into a green space improves the neighborhood’s appearance and livability. A landscaped, actively used garden deters littering and informal dumping, reduces the “vacant-lot” feeling that can invite nuisance activity, and replaces it with an organized, welcoming place that signals care and safety. Second, the project can be managed and sustained through a clear, volunteer-led structure supported by local partnerships. A Garden Steering Committee—made up of nearby residents and representatives from interested community organizations—would oversee operations, set rules, assign plots, and coordinate volunteer schedules. Regular workdays would be held for shared tasks such as weeding common areas, maintaining pathways, and seasonal clean-up. To strengthen long-term stability, the garden would pursue partnerships with Evergreen schools (for educational programming), local nonprofits focused on food security, and area businesses (for donations of lumber, tools, compost, and native plants). If the Council approves the concept, the organizing group can also establish a simple membership model (e.g., modest annual plot fees on a sliding scale, with sponsored plots for low-income gardeners) to fund routine supplies, signage, and minor repairs—further reducing any need for city funding. Because the Council is rightly budget-conscious, I want to address likely concerns directly. Maintenance costs and the risk of neglect: The most common concern with community projects is that initial enthusiasm fades. To prevent this, the garden would operate under a written agreement and clear accountability. The Steering Committee would adopt baseline standards (weed control, litter removal, pathway upkeep, and end-of-season plot clean-out) and a predictable schedule for inspections. Plot holders would sign participation guidelines and commit to minimum maintenance expectations; plots that are repeatedly neglected would be reassigned. In addition, shared spaces—beds, paths, and gathering areas—would be maintained through scheduled volunteer days with posted responsibilities. The organizing group is prepared to carry the responsibility for routine maintenance, with the City’s role limited to approving the land use and setting reasonable conditions. The result is a cared-for site that is visibly maintained, rather than an unfunded obligation placed on municipal staff. Water usage and operating impact: Water access is essential, but it can be handled responsibly. The garden can prioritize water-wise practices such as drip irrigation, mulching, compost-amended soil to retain moisture, and drought-tolerant plant choices in common areas. The group can also install rain barrels or similar rain-capture solutions where feasible and permissible. If a city water connection is necessary, the garden can use a metered connection so usage is transparent and budgetable, with costs covered by plot fees and donations. This approach ensures the Council can be confident that water use will be measured, conservation-focused, and not an open-ended expense. A final practical concern is that the lot currently attracts litter and creates a negative impression. A community garden directly addresses this problem by converting an unmonitored space into an active, routinely visited site. Regular foot traffic by gardeners and neighbors is one of the simplest, most effective deterrents to dumping and vandalism. Modest design elements—such as a low, attractive fence, clear signage, and defined paths—will reinforce that the space is cared for and monitored by the community. In summary, approving the Evergreen Community Garden at Maple Avenue and 4th Street would transform an underused, litter-prone lot into a clean, productive, and community-building green space. It would improve fresh food access, strengthen neighborhood connections, and beautify the area while remaining financially prudent through volunteer management, partnerships, and self-funding mechanisms. I respectfully ask the Council to place this proposal on an upcoming agenda and authorize the conversion of the lot for community garden use, subject to a reasonable operating agreement. Thank you for your time and for your careful stewardship of Evergreen’s resources. I would welcome the opportunity to speak at a council meeting or provide a detailed operations plan and letters of support from residents. Respectfully, [Your Name] Evergreen Resident

Result

#2

Winning Votes

1 / 3

Average Score

82
Judge Models OpenAI GPT-5.4

Total Score

89

Overall Comments

Answer B is highly effective, focused, and well tailored to a budget-conscious city council. It clearly explains resident benefits, offers a credible volunteer-led management structure with sustainable funding mechanisms, and addresses multiple practical concerns in a disciplined way. Its strongest qualities are its tight alignment with municipal priorities, concrete accountability measures, and persuasive framing of the garden as a low-risk, low-burden civic improvement.

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Persuasiveness

Weight 35%
88

The argument is highly persuasive because it combines civic benefits with low-risk implementation. It repeatedly ties the proposal to public health, neighborhood vitality, and minimal municipal burden, making the case especially compelling for approval.

Logic

Weight 20%
87

The reasoning is disciplined and practical throughout. Benefits lead naturally into management, then into concern mitigation, and the operational safeguards such as agreements, standards, reassignment of neglected plots, and metered water use strengthen causal credibility.

Audience Fit

Weight 20%
90

This response is exceptionally well tuned to a cautious, budget-conscious city council. It anticipates administrative concerns, emphasizes limited city obligations, and frames approval as a prudent, conditioned decision rather than an open-ended commitment.

Clarity

Weight 15%
87

The letter is clear, orderly, and concise without feeling thin. Each paragraph has a distinct purpose, and the concerns are addressed in a direct, easy-to-evaluate format.

Ethics & Safety

Weight 10%
93

The response is fully safe and ethical, with a responsible, community-oriented proposal. It also models transparency and accountability through agreements, measured resource use, and inclusive access features such as sliding-scale plot fees.

Total Score

76

Overall Comments

Answer B is a competent and well-organized persuasive letter that covers all required points clearly. It addresses food access, community building, green space, management structure, and two council concerns (maintenance/neglect and water usage). It also adds a practical bonus point about the lot currently attracting litter. However, it lacks the specificity and vividness of Answer A: the management plan references a generic "Garden Steering Committee" without naming real or plausible partner organizations, and the concern rebuttals, while logical, are less detailed and less persuasive. The tone is appropriately formal but somewhat more generic. The sliding-scale membership model is a nice touch, but overall the letter feels less tailored and less compelling than Answer A.

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Persuasiveness

Weight 35%
72

Answer B is persuasive but more generic. It covers the key arguments competently but lacks the specificity and rhetorical sharpness of Answer A. The sliding-scale plot fee model is a good touch, but the absence of named partners or quantified community support weakens the overall persuasive impact.

Logic

Weight 20%
75

Answer B is logically sound and well-organized. The flow from benefits to management to concerns is clear. However, the logic is somewhat surface-level in places — for example, the water concern rebuttal mentions metered connections and plot fees but does not quantify or compare usage, making it slightly less rigorous than Answer A.

Audience Fit

Weight 20%
74

Answer B is appropriately formal and does address the council's budget concerns, but it is less precisely calibrated to the council's known priorities. The language is slightly more generic and the management plan less convincing to a skeptical audience. The offer to provide a detailed operations plan at the end is a good audience-aware touch.

Clarity

Weight 15%
78

Answer B is also clearly written and well-organized. It is slightly more concise than Answer A, which is a minor advantage, but the lack of headers makes it slightly harder to scan. The prose is clean and professional throughout.

Ethics & Safety

Weight 10%
90

Answer B is equally ethical and appropriate. It includes a sliding-scale fee model for low-income gardeners, which is a notably inclusive and equitable touch. No ethical concerns whatsoever.

Total Score

80

Overall Comments

Answer B is a very strong and well-written letter that successfully fulfills all the requirements of the prompt. It presents a logical case for the community garden, addresses potential concerns thoughtfully, and maintains a professional tone. Its primary weakness in comparison to Answer A is a lack of specificity; the management plan and partnerships are described in more general terms, which makes the proposal feel slightly less concrete and well-prepared.

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Persuasiveness

Weight 35%
75

The letter is persuasive and makes a solid case. However, it is less compelling than Answer A because its plan is more generic. Phrases like 'representatives from interested community organizations' and 'area businesses' lack the convincing power of the specific examples used in the other answer.

Logic

Weight 20%
80

The letter follows a logical progression of ideas, moving from benefits to management to concerns. The argument is easy to follow and well-reasoned. The structure is slightly less effective than A's due to the lack of headings, which makes the text a bit denser.

Audience Fit

Weight 20%
80

The letter demonstrates a strong understanding of the audience, repeatedly highlighting that the project will not be a financial burden on the city. The tone is appropriately formal and respectful. It effectively addresses the council's likely concerns.

Clarity

Weight 15%
80

The letter is written with excellent clarity. The language is precise and the sentences are well-constructed. While perfectly understandable, the block-paragraph format is slightly less scannable than the headed sections in Answer A.

Ethics & Safety

Weight 10%
100

The answer is ethically sound and contains no safety concerns.

Comparison Summary

Final rank order is determined by judge-wise rank aggregation (average rank + Borda tie-break). Average score is shown for reference.

Judges: 3

Winning Votes

2 / 3

Average Score

86
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Winning Votes

1 / 3

Average Score

82
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Judging Results

Why This Side Won

Answer A wins because it presents a more credible and thoroughly developed plan, which makes it significantly more persuasive. The inclusion of specific details—such as 'over forty residents' ready to form an association and named potential partners like 'Greenleaf Hardware'—transforms the proposal from a good idea into a viable, well-organized project. This level of detail is precisely what a cautious, budget-conscious city council would need to see to feel confident in approving the project. While Answer B is also very good, its more general approach makes its plan seem less concrete and therefore less compelling.

Why This Side Won

Answer A wins because it is more persuasive, more specific, and better tailored to the council's known priorities. It names concrete partner organizations and quantifies community interest, making the management plan far more credible. Its rebuttal of the maintenance concern includes the clever argument that the city already spends money on the neglected lot, directly addressing the budget-conscious council's mindset. The overall framing — transforming a civic liability into a civic asset at virtually no cost — is more rhetorically powerful and audience-aligned than Answer B's more generic approach. While both letters are solid, Answer A consistently outperforms on persuasiveness, logic, and audience fit.

Judge Models OpenAI GPT-5.4

Why This Side Won

Answer B wins because it is more strategically persuasive for the stated audience. While both answers are strong and complete, B is tighter, more council-oriented, and more concrete about governance, accountability, and cost containment. It addresses concerns with practical operational detail and consistently frames the proposal in terms of fiscal prudence and manageable city involvement, which better matches the task context and judging priorities.

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